In early morning, l and my friends went to headmaster's office and knocked.
'knock,knock!' headmaster opended the door, and I started to say about my opinion for E.O.P. "E.O.P cards must be stopped. it;s so hard to memorize the words, and we're gerring more and more busy, so we don'r have time to memorize EOP cards to just cards. no more memorizing!
and yoon sung started to say. "also, EOP cards are not fair, I believe that we have to get some freedoms which we can use. I know that this camp is English camp, but we 're koreans. I think that GLPS EOP cards and memorizes paragraphs is too much punishing!"
the headmaster tried to say something, but other friend started faster.
"plus, we paid 4000 dollars to study English, and for little bit of freedom. if P.A tries to gave us the E.O.P, I will tell them
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I believe this story will turn out much better if you correct some things. Some little mistakes can be really annoying, you know.
ReplyDeletel and my friends - this should be 'my friends and I'
And don't forget to capitalize!
Punctuation is really important too. I see some quotation marks and periods missing.